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I am Carl in Van Helsing!

writing is good!
and so is pizza... have fun!

Speaking of "Narcissus" I have to find the beta you sent me and do that!

You must! You don't have to re-write the whole thing, just bring it to a conclusion on some level that will leave you and the reader satisfied knowing that while it isn't over on the large scale there is some sort of resolve that lets them sleep at night.

I wouldn't start all the way back at the beggining of the lab scene, but I would put an image or two of what happened in there.
I see it as opening to Victor looking down on the barn, then walking into the unlocked door. He looks around and comes across him, then we go to the flashbacks, then the story, and go from there. I do want to have where he's up in the tree and sees Logan running.
I have sicked the creativity-bug upon you and he hath bitten you soundly!

Woohoo!!
Probably be a week or more until I get it; it'll be up at my parents house and it would be better just to wait until I got back up there than to send it down here.
*sigh* I must be patient.

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If you need, I still have the beta file!

Argh... I don't know if I can continue it, even if it just followed the brothers' storyline... Still debating it! >.<

I just feel that starting at the barn and flashing back to the tree, when the tree wasn't that long ago, would push the number of flashbacks over the edge for a comic. Personally, anyway, with what I'm picturing in my head... If you can make it work, go for it! Did you want me to give you a scripted version, or do you have it plotted out already?

>__< I hope you like it when you see it! Make sure your parents don't keep it anywhere that's too warm.

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I think I have it, but I'll check.

You can do it!!

If you could give me a scripted version of how you see it I think that would be best; it is your story after all.

Heck, I don't even know if it's arrived at their house yet; they've been down in Wichita with my sister helping her with her baby and they won't get back until latter today so I'm wondering if it's on their porch right now. Now I'm freaking out! I hope it doesn't get damaged!

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Kk.

I'll try... but for now, I think I'm pooped out on that story. Though, who knows, maybe scripting it will inspire more plotness! I'll get right on it! ...metaphorically speaking, of course.

Meh, a couple days outside wouldn't hurt it. And I packed that sucker with a lot of bubblewrap an' packing peanuts.

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*tries to hypnotize you* You are *not* pooped out on the story...you have a brilliant idea that will resolve it and make it an Epic short story...

My mom called me around 4:30 in the afternoon to say it arrived! But going to have to wait until this weekend before I can get to it. RaR!!

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Erg... trying... to... submit... .... nope, nothin' yet. Sorry.

Tell her to lightly shake the box; if there's no tinkling glass, yer fine. Be patient!

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Poo.

Eeeehhh!!! I don't want to be patient! Mehhhh!! *runs off to work frustration off in slash-story form*

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Oh, how I could taunt you... and I think I shall. I have here, unposted, a photo of your gift! I could give you a sneak peek... Or, I could make you wait until you see the real thing.

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