Mmmm pizza!

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Sweet heaven, I see the light.
I feel...love and life; sun and shine.
But here in this Hades I cannot touch...
The forbidden angels of love cannot save me.

I see the demons of your hell.
I kiss the angels of your despair.

ooooh exciting!
have fun makin' Pizza!!

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"Always take a banana to a party, Rose. Bananas are good." -The Doctor

~Team-Edward-N-Jacob
♥We need to stick up for both, Cuz no one else will!♥

Have fun with the making of the pizzas! *stomach growls* Oooh, pizza. That sounds good...

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I am Kate Beckinsale in dA's Celebrities Crew!
I am Carl in Van Helsing!

EEEEKK!!!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!

I've just printed the two chapters out and am going to edit them when I have time.
I got into that story with Victor and Logan, great work! You impress me all the time with your story-telling. You're going to write more...right? *puppy/kitty-eyes*

And I had an idea; could I draw a that Vic/Logan story you just posted? Could I draw it in comic-form I mean?

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Please look through my gallery [link]
and tell me what you think.

Heh... It's not quite all it's cracked up to be. But thanks!

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I am Alexander Siddig in dA's Celebrities Crew!

Yer welcome! Was it the right draft, though? I transferred all your stories from my old comp, and any DOC files you sent were corrupted. (Lovely parting gift from the old comp's internet stint...grr...) I'm sure I can find the original attachments again, but, for now, I wasn't sure if any of those bum ones were versions of Savage Garden. O.o The one I put up was from October 13th.

...OMG, you flatter me to no end! I'm glad you enjoy my story despite its un-movie-ness! Man, who am I to stand in the way of art? Go for it!! Draw zee comeec! Or whatever you like!

And mum wasn't able to get to the post office Friday, but she says she's definitely going today... I'll let you know for sure once I hear your stuff IS in the mail.

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They seemed fine to me; of course there were a lot of spelling errors and mini plot-holes that only I could see that were of my own making, and if I can see them than someone else will. So I printed them off and am making corrections and additions.

I really do enjoy your story! I can't wait until you add more to it! I'll get started on the comic right away, but for it to be as visually dynamic as your story is the script is going to have to be played around with. Some of the fantastic phrases you used in the story that weren't part of any dialog between the characters I don't want to be lost, and some of the plot-building flashbacks you put in I'd like to draw as well, so that might mean re-arranging a little bit.
What if I draw out a storyboard that shows the panels in the order I see them, and I post them here in my scraps and you can look through them and give me your opinions about what you like or don't like. Would that work?

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Please look through my gallery [link]
and tell me what you think.

Kk. Speaking of editing... I gotta find "Narcissus". Damn. O.O

>_< I'm not sure yet if there'll be more to the story... I know I've left it at a very continuable point, but it feels like I'd have to rewrite the entire film if I comitted to another chapter of revised movie plot. Dunno.

I think a logical place to start a comic version from would be Vic keeping watch in the tree and suddenly hearing Wolvie running by, then starting to shadow him all the way to the barn. Or, if you want a wider scope and a longer comic, you could start it as far back as the lab scene.
If you want, I can even rewrite the portions you want to draw as a script, complete with sound effects, scenery suggestions, facial expressions, etc? I can already see it played out like a Marvel-style comic book! Your comic idea is gettin' the creativity flowing!!!

And your pressie is in the mail! It should arrive in a couple of days.

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I am Alexander Siddig in dA's Celebrities Crew!