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You make me feel like a fish out of water,
Gasping for breath in a saltless sea
Where I can't stay long for fear of exhaustion,
But while I'm there, I'm full of glee.

The wind and the waves have different feels,
The water constricting, the breeze divine;
If only I could stand to stay in the air
And make your reality mine.

However short, however brief I can keep afloat,
I'll see the moments memorised, everything etched in
To my tiny guppy recollection, still feeling every time
I brushed you with my fin.

But fish must swim and birds must fly,
And if we chanced to meet again
We'd be odds out, mismatched kin,
Unhappy to the end.
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Written 2007, during a theatre rehearsal. Xb

I think this is almost the last of my old, hidden-away poetry, so there won't be any more unless I get some new inspiration.


Copyright L.P.V.

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:iconguenvanhelsing:
I like it! it's full of feeling. :hug:
:iconlunaeshark:
I love it! :dance: Makes me think of the sea.

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~dreams come from within, let your imagination soar~
:iconcrazyhobbitgirl:
Awesome! I love it!

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"Always take a banana to a party, Rose. Bananas are good." -The Doctor

~Team-Edward-N-Jacob
♥We need to stick up for both, Cuz no one else will!♥

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